3 Questions for Martha Collins

1. What is your personal/aesthetic relationship to the poetic line? That is, how do you understand it, use it, etc.

For me, the poetic line is a musical element. This is of course most obvious in formal verse, where we can hear the underlying rhythm—the bass line, so to speak—without the words. But central to all poetry written in lines is a counterpoint, or tension, between syntax and line. Sometimes the tension is minimal, as in Hebrew prosody, or Walt Whitman, with his insistently end-stopped lines. Lately I’ve been writing some poems in which each line is a complete syntactic unit, often a sentence. The poetic tension, here, is created by the space between the sentences—not just a line break, in this case, but a stanza break as well.

More often, though, I’m interested in a more overt tension that arises from enjambment, caesurae, varied line length, and attention to each line as a unit in itself. Denise Levertov speaks of a line break having the value of half a comma, and describes the use of line as a way of “scoring” the poem, as in music, so that the reader will know how to hear it. Not all poets use the line in this way, of course: some lines and line breaks are more visual than aural, and some have other functions. But for me, the line creates both musical effects and subtle nuances which may either imitate a speaking voice or push against it. The line break is central, of course: words are emphasized and/or anticipated by their placement at the end or the beginning of the line. But the line as container, as a small unit in itself, is also important to me—like a musical phrase, often, to be heard without a breath.

2. Do you find a relationship between words and writing and the human body? Or between your writing and your body?

Breath, of course, and mouth and tongue to speak and ears to hear: I can’t write without directly engaging these aspects of my body. Beyond that, when words are making music for me, they’re also becoming, themselves, almost corporeal, reverberating within me until they take on the almost physical weight of additional meaning and nuance, crossing the borders of definition to dance with other words and sounds. John Hollander has written of how poetry takes us back to our pre-literate years, when we babbled as babies, loving sound for its own sake: words like things in our mouths. And from there to the rest of the body: tinglings, rushes, tremblings.

Much of my recent poetry focuses on race. This has made me think a lot about skin, which I, like many white people, had tended to take for granted. Thinking about has to some extent led to thinking through my skin (which is not of course white at all, but rather pinkish).

3. Is there anything you dislike about being a poet?

Well, there’s not a whole lot of money in it! Which in some ways is good: unlike fiction writers, for instance, or painters, poets can’t even dream about compromising for the sake of money. Which of course doesn’t prevent the oxymoronic Poetry Business, aka Po Biz, from being a factor in most of our lives. That’s certainly what I dislike most about being a poet—but again, there’s the good part, which is being in contact and dialogue with other poets. Sometimes I envy Emily Dickinson her solitude; most days, I don’t.

[white paper #2]

the skin under
all skin is all
white seen skin
is skin deep none

is white pink
is blood showing
through almost
transparent thin

skin blood as in
on our hands
protected by gloves
laws guns while

brown tan to almost
black protects from
sun that burns
us red-handed us

first published in The Journal (Spring-summer 2011)
forthcoming in White Papers (Pittsburgh, 2012)

Martha Collins is the author of the forthcoming White Papers (Pittsburgh, 2012), and of the book-length poem Blue Front (Graywolf, 2006), which won an Anisfield-Wolf Award. Collins has also published four earlier collections of poems and two collections of co-translated Vietnamese poetry. Pauline Delaney Professor of Creative Writing at Oberlin College until 2007, Collins served as Distinguished Visiting Writer at Cornell University in 2010, and is currently editor-at-large for FIELD magazine.

Her website is http://www.marthacollinspoet.com

Post Secret

This is one of my–and Isabel’s–favorite projects of all time: www.postsecret.com/

Mi’Jan Celie Tho-Biaz Review of www.yelp.com

Mi’Jan Celie Tho-Biaz

Review of www.yelp.com (San Francisco edition)

Do you need to find a good dentist/pitcher of sangria/yoga studio offering aerial classes accompanied by live African drumming/second hand sci-fi bookstore? Of course you do, whose life would be complete without any of that. Or maybe your reading interests span the quirky category, and you enjoy taking in the range of internet writings by average folk, about their average and not-so-average parts of their lives. In either case, yelp.com is your online one stop site for many metropolitan cities and urban communities. None of its contributing reviewers are paid, and the majority appear to be city slickers who spend their cubicle dwelling days dashing off hopeful “The Best of Craigslist” missives and yelp.com reviews. From the looks of it, everything – restaurants, classes, religious organizations, neighborhoods – can be the target of praise worthy or abomination reviews.

In life offline, the brick and mortar businesses that receive stellar feedback from yelpers are awarded a sticker to affix to their storefront window stating: “People Love Us on Yelp.” That’s if you rock in the world of yelp. For those businesses with awful customer service, or mediocre pricing in their respective market, business owners beware. Yelpers will call out your establishment in vivid detail, stating employee names, dates, awkward interactions, and perhaps even capturing facial expressions and gestures. And what’s more, there will be no confusion about which business they are referring to as each review lists at the top of the page: the address, photograph, website, and hours of operation. These items are generally accurate, and up to date.

A bad review is well, bad. However a series of really awful reviews is a sign for the reader to stay away at all costs. Ironically, this level of honesty and feedback is helpful, especially if a business is new, or you happen to be fresh off the boat, and not privy to extensive word-of-mouth. Reading about the insensitive, narcissistic, consistently late, megalomaniac obgyn who sports crazy eyes, and has a penchant for camouflage motif exam rooms (why?!) is helpful to know when considering who NOT to schedule an evaluation of your girl parts. Similarly, if you find yourself wanting to try out a new form of yoga and think bikram might be the way to sweat yourself into nirvana, you might appreciate knowing that your neighborhood studio has 38 reviews about the plethora of dank body odor and toe jam laden community yoga mats before you buy a trial monthly pass. Just saying. Or maybe you are in the mood to pay for silly pain, and considering whether or not you should take advantage of the weekly special for a bit of wax with your mani-pedi. The naïve patron might hastily book the appointment on the spot, but not you, and least of all, not before reading the latest post, lest you regret it. Yes, one dreadful review by Trisha from Noe Valley, detailing her entire 55 minute experience of second degree burns on both armpits, and eyebrows that evoke a constant irritated/surprised expression means you can avoid a potentially bad episode in your high maintenance, recessionista life.

At its worst, yelp allows consumers to exact revenge on all the establishments that may or may not deserve a severely negative review. At its best, yelpers provide much needed feedback on their encounters in an even handed fashion, for the entire world to discuss on the boards and ongoing review thread. Potential patrons can lament and rejoice in their experiences, and perhaps businesses can grow and improve in the areas where they may be weak (which is actually good for business in the long run, provided patrons continue to post). For these reasons, the yelp.com site provides an invaluable service, as long as the reader uses discretion and the businesses take heed.

Embroidered Worlds

Katrina Memorial

Yesterday I had the pleasure of taking the memoir class to the Museum of International Art. I’m quite familiar with the collection, but the show “The Arts of Survival” was new and powerful. Vodou flags respond to the earthquake in Haiti, puppets to a volcano in Java.
Closest to home, some outsider art on Katrina. Outsider artist Joe Minter of Birmingham, Alabama built a three acre “African Village in America” installation. The memorial piece “Rebuild and Restore New Orleans” is housed within it.

Paint & Sparrow by Alona Bonanno

Paint & Sparrow
by Alona Bonanno
 
 
There are no words between us
Only movement and song
 
The rhythm of your hooves against the red dirt
Lends ground to my airy tune
 
It is your voice that causes me to gallop giddy
Across open stretches of desert
 
Your familiar call
Which beckons me back again
 
Your whistle from the branch of an aging oak
Calms my racing heart
 
When your thick body rests in the deep night
I find comfort in the warmth of your mane
 
Remaining there till morning
Our chests rising and falling in unison

***
Alona Bonanno is a student in the creative writing program at SFCC. She is a current editor on the Santa Fe Literary Review, and right now is considering submissions of non-fiction and memoir in particular.

Two poems by Adam McGee

Hornets

The foot goes through the ground’s false ground.
The earth is not a floor but a land. The hornets’
nest is the universe a moment before everything—
its potential is in its opening out. My mother

is only seven, looking for blackberries
on her grandmother’s farm when the world begins
in her legs, the nerves alive and suddenly singing fire.
How many times is she bitten? Each bite is a star

if a star is a place where the void is bothered by
a particularly difficult question. She runs
and the hornets follow. She has given them
to the light and they are dying to repay her.

***

Imago Dei
PET/CT scan shows cancer

The radiotracer will set my organs to glowing
like messages written in invisible ink.
I need only lie very still to be converted
into a negative bible of light on dark.
The starched language of science—of
unstable sugars and their brief half-lives—
is the thinnest layer of semantic lead
shielding from the miraculous, from sensors
that detect the faintest afterthought of matter.
As in poetry and the Eucharist,
things are substituted for other things,
high energy positrons, zeros and ones
at last transfigured into the flesh itself
and projected onto monitors where
the bones will shine like neon tubes.
And then comes the bad news
uttered like an apology for the frangible.
The words rise unbidden to the lips
as when the soft interior of the bread
is exposed and elevated:
this is my body, broken—

***

Adam McGee was raised in rural Delaware and now lives in Boston, where he is completing doctoral work at Harvard University. His poetry has been published in Potomac Review. He holds an A.M. in African and African American Studies from Harvard University, and an M.T.S. from Harvard Divinity School.

Curated by Devon Miller-Duggan.

Creativity Budget

Miriam Sagan:
A question…if you had $100 to spend in 30 minutes on creative supplies, what would you buy? $10.00?
This from someone who just bought two skeins of wool, two knitting needles (I need the yarn lady to cast on), lavender bath salts, and sunflower soap. And I feel much much better about life. I’m thinking about those small things that make a difference. Sometimes giving away $25 has the same effect of jogging my mood out of the ordinary. What do you think?
Suzi Winson: Magic Markers, wrapping paper, scotch tape, a box of pens, and a roll of paper towels . Bear in mind, in NY that’s what 100 dollars buys. Not sure what I’m making with all of that, but I would be one happy camper. I might do this tomorrow in fact. With $10, scotch tape makes me happy.
Diana Ceres: I’d put it all on my Starbucks gold card and drink lots of java. Caffeine yes! However, my question for you, Dearest Mir, may I have a slightly larger budget? If so, I would purchase a Macbook Air, CS5, a Leica S2, the hot pink Rolex I’ve been drooling over for the past year and change, and a one-way ticket to Paris. Off the cuff, of course. :)
Margo Conover: gasoline..Kai Harper Leah clay, glaze pencils and a ceramics monthly magazine…
Beth Surdut: Just did that– one pair ultra -portable binoculars, silk, a few bottles of fiber-reactive dyes, and an out of print book of EB White essays.
Marie Longserre: I thought I was being very creative on my wandering, antiquing, lunch out, errand running day today, and of course I ultimately bought shoes. I’m voting for shoes, the aforementioned gasoline, and/or airline ticket, and being on the move. For under $10: a new box of 64 crayons. Just because.
Anne Cunningham-Gigglepants: i’ll take even just the ten bucks for a sketch book, a glue stick and some secondhand magazines for a collage day; already have the coffee and another day left in the weekend.
Devon Miller-Duggan: I’d buy $100. worth of junk jewelry and good glue to make encrusted crosses with. But that’s mostly because that’s what I’m making at the moment. If I were doing paper stuff at the moment, then I’d buy $100 worth of handmade papers. Same goes for $10.–what ever I’m working on is what I want stuff for.
Lorraine Lener Ciancio: well, you know what I’d buy (yarn! like yesterday) and it does feel soo good! and notebooks – I love new notebooks. enjoy!

Ultra Yarn Bombing: Installations by Olek

Street Crochet artist Olek–
http://agataolek.com/home.html

Thanks to Isabel W.S.
***
And check this out! Sudasi just sent it–
Yarn-bombed music video by Seventeen Evergreen -
http://boingboing.net/2011/11/04/yarn-bombed-music-video-by-seventeen-evergreen.html

The death of Steve Jobs got me thinking–contributing blogger Devon Miller-Duggan is looking for optimism

The death of Steve Jobs got me thinking. Actually, a comment by one of my students about the death and how silly all the public grief was (especially the folks outside the stores holding up their ipads with animated burning candles on the screens). I said I didn’t think it was all that silly. 

Jobs was the last person I could absolutely identify with the sense of what it meant to be an American that I grew up with–the identity reflected in JFK’s inaugural speech–the notion that we were more than competent. We were uber-competent. We could decide to go to the moon and do it. Of course my  sense of our invulnerablilty and our boundless capacity and our commitment to doing good and doing right didn’t last very much beyond that inauguration. Even though I was pretty young, I knew something major was going on in October 1962: We lived in El Paso then and the SAC planes took off at 3-minute intervals for days. No planes of any sort were left on the ground for longer than it took to refuel them. And for some reason, I remember the NATO troops you saw when you went to the PX were particularly stiff and nervous-looking. And, of course, there were the notorious duck-and-cover drills, which even in 4th grade seemed silly to me.

Still, even in the midst of all the upheavals and revisions of the 60s and 70s (we had the National Guard in Wilmington for 5 years after the MLK assassination, so the Small Wonder got its full measure of the chaos), I remember thinking that people’s minds could be moved toward better, stronger, deeper truths–that they could be opened, and that light could shine. 

It’s been a while since I felt that. I had a nice visit from Optimism and Passion back in 2008. then they went away again. 

But several evenings ago the doorbell rang and it was a former student to whom I hadn’t spoken in a couple of years–since she graduated. She’s been working as an organizer of community gardens in Philadelphia–doing the sort of pro-green, pro-community, pro-change work that she’d always planned to do. But there she was on my doorstep with her boyfriend at 9 on a Monday night, out of the blue, freshly and glowingly full of excitement and enthusiasm for their time at Occupy Philly (you can see Robyn giving a press release at 12guageangel on youtube). They’d taken off on a post-gardening-season roadtrip to see old friends with nothing more than their amazingly light backpacks and some vague plans. That’s a sort of adventurousness I never had and am grateful neither of my daughters had, but I admire the heck out of it in others. 

They were brimful of excitement about the Occupy movement. They believe it is genuinely transformative and that it marks a true hinge-point in the country’s history. They Believe. God, I hope they’re right–both about the transformation and about how positive it will be. And I hope they travel safely and remain full of hope and spit and vinegar even longer than we did.

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