Starting a New Embroidery and Text Project (and looking for advice): 3 Garments

It looks like I have found someone to embroider these garments with text. The working draft is below. Your thoughts?

Pink Gown

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I said, more
than once:
never
get in a car
with boys
 
 
***
 
Child’s Gown

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smell of milk
indoors
swollen womb
     of possibility
blue jug
outside
     grass dunes the sea
 
***
 
 
Dress With Tags

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I was like a package
going nowhere
a dress with tags
like decals
on a steamer trunk
but I
was never sent
 

2 thoughts on “Starting a New Embroidery and Text Project (and looking for advice): 3 Garments

  1. Glad you think text ok–they’ve turned into a family. There are 4 more potential pieces that are flat textile. Dark pink on pink, blue of white baby, black on tag dress. Working on fonts–maybe script, all the same font in any case.
    Once it is done–hang it WHERE???

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