dead goldfinch
the invisible
has slunk away
too much
feeling—
dead goldfinch
the neighbor’s kittens
I played with—
dead goldfinch
or
dead goldfinch—
the neighbor’s kittens
I played with…
dead goldfinch
the invisible
has slunk away
too much
feeling—
dead goldfinch
the neighbor’s kittens
I played with—
dead goldfinch
or
dead goldfinch—
the neighbor’s kittens
I played with…
My favorite is the last one. Second one is a close second.
Thanks! Helpful to get your opinion.
Definitely prefer the last one
Hi Baro–hope the cats vs. birds theme didn’t distress you!
I like the second one but would prefer it switched:
Dead goldfinch–
too much
feeling