Miriam's Well: Poetry, Land Art, and Beyond

Santa Fe Literary Scene, Poetry, Land Art, New Mexico

dead goldfinch
the invisible
has slunk away

too much
feeling—
dead goldfinch

the neighbor’s kittens
I played with—
dead goldfinch

dead goldfinch—
the neighbor’s kittens
I played with…

Michael G. Smith on September 23, 2017 at 3:32 pm said:

My favorite is the last one. Second one is a close second.

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Miriam Sagan on September 23, 2017 at 3:37 pm said:

Thanks! Helpful to get your opinion.

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Baro Shalizi on September 23, 2017 at 7:53 pm said:

Definitely prefer the last one

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Miriam Sagan on September 24, 2017 at 2:17 pm said:

Hi Baro–hope the cats vs. birds theme didn’t distress you!

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ANNE WHITEHOUSE on September 27, 2017 at 2:55 am said:

I like the second one but would prefer it switched:
Dead goldfinch–
too much
feeling

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