Haiku Variants–which works best?

dead goldfinch
the invisible
has slunk away

too much
feeling—
dead goldfinch

the neighbor’s kittens
I played with—
dead goldfinch

or

dead goldfinch—
the neighbor’s kittens
I played with…

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About Miriam Sagan

I'm blogging about poetry, land art, haiku, women artists, road trips, and Baba Yaga at Miriam's Well (https://miriamswell.wordpress.com). The well is ALWAYS looking to publish poetry on our themes, sudden fiction, and guest bloggers and musers.

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