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But Is This A Haiku?

Posted on June 17, 2021 by Miriam Sagan

Somewhat under the weather, I took a nap and this came to me:

in darkness—
bird I thought
had flown

6 thoughts on “But Is This A Haiku?”

karlapoet on June 17, 2021 at 4:14 pm said:

Yep.

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- Miriam Sagan on June 17, 2021 at 11:26 pm said:
  
  Gracias!
  
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Hannah Mahoney on June 17, 2021 at 4:31 pm said:

Works as a haiku for me! I love that liminal snoozy state!

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- Miriam Sagan on June 17, 2021 at 11:26 pm said:
  
  Thank you for getting it!
  
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Rich Soos on June 17, 2021 at 5:17 pm said:

And when I awoke
I was alone, this bird had flown
So I lit a fire

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- Miriam Sagan on June 17, 2021 at 11:26 pm said:
  
  LOVE this! Thank you for adding…
  
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